Scribe post: 8/23

Thesis Day Two:

1.   Name or allude to the author and or title

2.   State your theme- should be universal and debatable

a.   Someone could disagree

b.   Should be arguable

3.   Project your focus

a.   A theme, an idea or a concept

EX: Bradbury suggests redemption from past mistakes is possible if people examine their lives honestly and forge relationships that help them change.

·      Theme: redemption from past mistakes is possible

   Can one argue the other side of this assertion?

  Some guilt always remains

·      Paragraph one

   If people honestly admit their mistakes to themselves and others, they can begin to find forgiveness

·      Paragraph two

   When people develop healthy relationships with others, they can begin to change their behavior and become good again.